Zero In On – AToZ Challenge 2014 – Day26

Hi Folks,


#AtoZChallenge - Idioms - @Sri_Indrasenan
A Guessing Game!

Somehow with Pooja’s tactful help and Keshav’s wedding planner friend John, Laya and Keshav had a big fat Indian wedding. Although Keshav wanted a beach wedding he compromised with Laya’s idea of having a palace wedding in Jaipur and then go on for a beach honeymoon in Goa. The highlight to the whole wedding was the wedding cake that was designed in the shape of a revolver clutched within stethoscope which Pooja has ordered and customized for the couple.

On their honeymoon night,

“Honey, I really have only 2 days for honeymoon? I am the unluckiest man in the world.”

“Blame your police department for not granting you leave.”

“Important case and the worst is they did grant me 5 days vacation but you used it all in your wedding and left me with a meager honeymoon.”

Laya rolled her eyes and said, “Oh, I was wrong? Wedding comes only once.”

“So are nuptial nights so let’s zero in on improving the country rather than arguing with me!” he said as he nibbled her ear lobes.

“Improving the country?” she asked with a puzzled look.

“Yeah, let’s improve the country’s already improving population.”


Is this the end or beginning of a happily ever after??? If you have missed the prequels then do read it from here.


Love & Cheers,


I am S(t)ri


  1. iam quite lucky to hav cum across ur blog…..nd i appreciate u for selecting idioms for the a to z challenge,and the characters ,doc nd commissioner….great!quite brilliant of pooja to get a cake designed as revolver nd steth.ur blog is tempting like eye candy… i got plenty to read ,nd i shall kp commenting for that makes u smile….


  2. A fitting finale to a story that kept us hooked for the entire month!! Enjoyed reading this story, Sri! Well done!! ♥


  3. I just realised I never caught the end of the series, thanks to traveling! Well done, Stri 🙂 Happy ending for the happy couple.


  4. Ah…they are now happily married… and that cake symbolizes their compatible life…ins’t it? Lovely…
    Congratulations on finishing the challenge beautifully!


  5. Loved this story totally!! Though it was a short and sweet one, it sure had its own twists and turns 😉 especially with Pooja. Birthday beach scene and revolver 🙂
    Wayyy to goo ❤


  6. Oh God!!! LOL!!! Hahahaha! That was quite an unexpected ending!!! Poor pooja- I kept on suspecting her intentions! Also I was thinking how will she kill keshav or laya or herself and how will you wind up the whole story in one remaining z post!!! 😛 😛 Wonderfully done challenge!!! 🙂


  7. Happy ending indeed and lovely twist to the revolver.
    Maybe another story for pooja…..she has been a ” pillar of support ” for the two.
    Congratulations for a good finale. But the population idea seems a bit clichéd😆😃


  8. Wow, this dentist and policeman couple must be making big dough to have a palace wedding in Jaipur 🙂 Pooja did well with the cake, though. And you did very well Sri with this serialized story and keeping up the suspense 🙂 Congratulations! And I hope your doc-cop couple find some other ways also to “improve their country” 😉


  9. aah such a good ending 🙂 tune tto khush kardiya porrthos 🙂 am gonna read d whole novel once nw. cheers on cumpleting the challenge (y) 🙂


  10. Awww that’s a beautiful ending… And so this Is what revolver was about!! You have the talent to keep your readers hooked 🙂


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