One Night Stand – AToZ Challenge 2014 – Day15

Hi Folks,


#AtoZChallenge - Idioms - @Sri_Indrasenan
A Guessing Game!

Time flew by; two hours went off like two minutes. Laya and Keshav cuddled up in a cozy quilt that was spread on the beach. Laya rubbed her palms and placed them on her cheek. “Do you want to go inside?” asked Keshav.

“Inside, where?”

“I have a room booked for the night.”

“Hmmm” she hesitated.

As they entered the room which was even more sensually decorated with purple and black curtains and scented with a mix of peppermint and lavender room freshener, Laya hugged Keshav.

His lips were on hers and they never knew who initiated the first kiss! He or She? How does it even matter now? Time flew by and what started as a peck on the lip became a full-fledged exploring of each other’s mouths. There was an obvious sexual urgency in them. Laya started unbuttoning Keshav’s shirt. “Ouch, your revolver” she said. He laughed and moved a little from her. As he placed the revolver on the table nearby he asked, “Are you sure? You want to do this?”

“Hmmm, I think so.”

“We are not some teenagers Laya who get desperate and end up having sex right on the first day of proposing to each other.”

“Yeah” she said. How men can ever talk sensibly even when they are turned on, she thought.

“I don’t want to have one night stand or a fling. Call me old fashioned, but when I make love to you I want should be sure that you are my wife.”

She loved him; yes she indeed loved him now. The love for him multiplied steadily. “Are you not sure now?”

Woman – although they love their men and trust them, they will ask silly questions an untimely hours, don’t they?

“Laya, it is not that! Let’s talk to our parents, get engaged.”

“Oh, I feel like the man here.”

He buttoned up his shirt back and they spent the night by watching movies and sipping wine!

“I am on cloud nine” she said.


To be continued…. If you have missed the prequels then do read it from here.


Love & Cheers,


I am S(t)ri


  1. Yes! they are going to wait. Perfect tension – and she is a tough customer, no?! LOVE IT! And the scene where he puts the gun down, very compelling. I could see it!!!


  2. Fun to read your story segments as part of the challenge. What a nice guy Keshav is wanting to marry her instead of a one night stand. That’s rare. He’s a keeper!


  3. sri.. please finish of all the episodes today itself.. im really dumbstruck by the way you write and the way the story is penned down..:) 🙂 🙂


  4. Hmmmm , that Keshav seems nicer now somehow… still a bit worried about that revolver… Have a feeling you’re gonna surprise us again though…:-)


  5. a bow to keshav!! my respect for him multiplied too.. n if am nt wrong, u r gng to bring a twist tmrw.. to lets enjoy d happy story while it lasts 😀


  6. Okay. Phew, after a whirlwind set of reading, I’m up to speed with your present story. I believe I landed her via Vaisakh’s blog. Like the way you’ve kept each part short and to the point and encompassed the prompt really well. Looking forward to how the rest of the story is going to turn out. Good luck. Oh, and like Vaisakh said – Respect to the DCP !:)


  7. Good one! This is the first one I am reading in this series I think.. and I instantly have a respect for Keshav.. I don’t know the past, haven’t read the prequels, but this is purely based on his moral side and demeanour here.. A win for him..

    Didn’t know you were writing a thriller.. I’ve got to read from the beginning now.. 🙂


    • Vaisakh… you read this first? Damn my whole work goes in vain… Thriller ko aise nahi padthe … 😦 Anyways thank a loootttt for your compliments 🙂 🙂 Do tell me, how I have written this story after the end of the series!


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