Hi Folks,
CHAPTER 5
They came out of the CCD in vain. Laya angrily stormed into her cabin and shouted, “We are wasting time, and maybe he is not the one.”
“Excuse me”, she heard an alluring masculine voice.
Both Pooja and Laya turned towards the direction from which the voice came and Laya was awestruck.
“Dr. Laya, may I have a minute or two with you?”
“Huh? Yeah!”, she gestured at Pooja to leave who promptly obeyed.
“Yes, tell me Mr…” stammered Laya in utter bewilderment.
“Mr. Keshav Krishnan. DCP, Chennai”.
“DCP?”
“Deputy Commissioner of Police.”
“Oh, sit down sir.”
“Laya, please. No sir or any other formalities please. Call me as Keshav.”
“Yeah okay sir, err Keshav. How may I help you?”
“Well, on the contrary I have helped you by finding you, and standing in front of you. Now help me, by coming out for a coffee with me.”
“Pardon”
“Don’t tell me that I didn’t do anything to your mind and heart since last Monday. I know you checked me out, and it was more than checking out.”
“But”
“To be frank, until that man started shouting I was gazing at you. You were an eye candy in the whole coffee shop.”
“Even you are” Laya couldn’t believe what she was telling but she was telling the truth.
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To be continued…. If you have missed the prequels then do read it from here.
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Love & Cheers,
S(t)ri
I am S(t)ri - A Lifestyle blog 
And because I missed commenting on Saturday – I get to jump to Sunday and find out right now what Laya says! Wheee!
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Ha ha! Thanks a lot Cristina!! 🙂 🙂
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Oh finally Laya met Keshav……
Eye candies……..
Loved it immensely Sri
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Thanks a lot Sitara!
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Getting interesting day by day..and yeah DCP..that looks like a bollywood storyline 😉
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Ha ha ha.. Thanks, I am glad that you find it interesting!! 🙂
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haha or ouch!! he turned out to be a DCP…Loove it..she was being watched and she thought they were looking for him:)
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Wait and watch Vish!!! 😀
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haha oh wow! now this is something fairy tales are made of!
Random Thoughts Naba
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Thanks a lot Naba!! 🙂
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A DCP in CCD??!! Wow this is getting more interesting!
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Yeah indeed!! DCP in CCD 😉
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DCP! ahaha this is getting better no?
Richa
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Hopefully 😉 😉
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Things are certainly heating up, Sri! Waiting for Monday 😀 Will they be sharing some french fries together ? 😉
*Shailaja*
Introspection in Shades of 11
A to Z Challenge, 2014/ UBC, April 2014
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Shailaja, Thanks a lot!! I think they might share some sandwich!! Doctor and a fit DCP 😉
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Finally the love is two-way 😀 Waiting for the DCP story now 😀
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Yeah!! DCP DCP!!! The mysterious gut has a name now!
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Eye candy indeed!! Very nicely put but what is the catch.
Nice tempo.
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Thanks a lot!! The catch is well… you will get to know!
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An interesting story. I will have to look at what comes before!
Thank you for visiting Crazy Town in Looney Land
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Thanks a lot 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Fun post Eye-Candy is clever! #atozchallenge at http://4covert2overt.blogspot.com/
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Thanks a lot!!! 🙂 🙂
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Hehehe!!! :)) This is interesting… Mutual admiration (M-word, God I am turning insane ) waiting for next 🙂
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Ha Ha shesha!! I am glad that you find it interesting!! 🙂
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Well, how fortunate that it seems to be working out! ☺
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Yup lucky indeed!!!
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Oooo, now that’s a twist in the story,falling in love with DCP! I can see that this is going to be love-cum-crime story 🙂 Waiting for the next part Sri 🙂
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Ha Ha, thanks a lot Prasanna 🙂
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Oh wow…this just got a whole lot hotter!! Looking forward to what happens next! 😀
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Thanks a lot Kathy!!! 🙂 🙂
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Very intriguing!
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Thanks a lot Carrie 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Going well….This DCP material seems…….well I’ll wait for the next part 🙂
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Ha ha!!! Seems????
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I love this twist on the A to Z challenge! Keep up the good work 🙂
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Thanks a lot!
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Going great! Waiting for the next 🙂
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Thanks a lot Kaushik!!
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Ouuuu the chemistry is sizzling… Then… Then…
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Thanks a lot 🙂 🙂 Then then… more chemistry!
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DCP entry with – “I have helped you by finding you, and standing in front of you” seems to be interesting.
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Thanks a lot 🙂 🙂
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Do people with high blood sugar avoid eye candy? LOL..just kidding 🙂 The twist to the tale is the DCP, want more 🙂
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Thanks a lot Sulekha!! 🙂
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well thats a smooth DCP……….
PhenoMenon
http://throodalookingglass.com/2014/04/extraordinary-exciting-experiences/
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Ha ha indeed 🙂
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Wow, so Laya finally found her voice. You should turn this into a novella…its quite exciting 🙂
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Thanks a lot Kajal 🙂 🙂
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This just keeps getting better. Kudos Girl!!
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Oh Finally!! And what an entry!!! Awesome, girl!! Keep going…
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Thank you 😛 😀 *tune mari entry yaar dil mein baji ghanti* lol
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Ooh this is hotting up. Some things are meant to be. Waiting to see how this turns out.
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Thank you so much!!! 😀
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In Hindi we have a saying – aag barabar lagi hui hai dono taraf (loosely translated as – fire of passion is going strong on both sides…something like that!) This is getting very interesting now, Srilakshmi 🙂
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Samaj Mein aagaya!!! Aag thoda zyaada hi lagi hui hai 😉
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OMG!!..he turns out to be the DCP ….now what …
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Ha ha ha 😀 😛 now we wait!
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Great going! read the previous posts as well.. now waiting for F to Z. 🙂
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Thanks a lot Archana 🙂 🙂
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Aha! This is getting interesting! Liked that he is so open about the feelings!! Great going Sri 🙂
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Thanks a lot Shilpa 😀 😛
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Nice twist!
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Thanks a lot Ally 🙂 Can you give ur blog url, so that I can visit you back!
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Ohho…nice twist…waiting eagerly
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Thanks a lot 🙂
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Have always loved the term “eye candy”. You certainly know how to put a twist on things. So enjoyable
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Thanks a lot Carol. I love the term too 😀
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That’s an interesting and totally unexpected twist!! So HE found HER and sadly, he wasn’t an axe murderer after all..curiouser and curiouser…where will it go from here? Do tell, Sri.
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Thank you so much 🙂 🙂 I am glad that the story makes you curious :)We can still make him an axe murderer 😉
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I don’t know about eye candies but reading you sure is a candy for my soul 🙂
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Thank you so much Nikita 😉 That was a lovely compliment!!!
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She’s a not sassy! X
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Ha ha, too soon to decide!!! Let’s wait and watch!
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whooo.. this one was an interesting turn of events.. lots more is going to happen!! :D. awaiting!!
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Yupppp!!!! Thanks a lot!
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Omg!! This wasn’t expected! I ❤ you for this one!! Can't wait for next.. but my sixth sense is smelling something fishy!! oops! Idiom! 😛 😀
Am I right?
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❤ u too!!! Knowing me, you can expect a lot of twists!! 😉
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oooohh!! What could be next!! You featured image is no help yet! 😛
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He he he!!! Wait for H to understand the featured image!!! 😉
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Ouuu – now we have some action here! Itll be interesting to see how this goes… Ha ha eye candy – love that expression:-) .-) Way to go!
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Thanks a lot!!! 😉
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Ohhhhh DCP..I like I like!
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I too like 😛 😀
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I really wanna know how difficult or easy was it to put all these idioms in order for this story 🙂
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Hey, It is quite simple! I always use a lotta idioms in my day to day life. Idioms are my cup of tea! So writing this story was simple and comfortable!
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oh wow!! now this is some thing 🙂 am feeling like i have found my own dream guy 😀 though i wonder where keshava popped up from suddenly, out of the blue 😉 c d effect of ur novel.. i hav started talkin in idioms 😀
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I know that feel!!! Yeah, I am glad that my novel is having a positive effect on you!
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